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Positives

  • The audio adds a good feel to it
  • The visuals are nice and the animation of the wheel is well done

Needs Work

  • Unfortunately, the biggest thing is that it just doesn't feel like a game. There are choices but from what I could tell they didn't change anything.
  • There was a visual bug with the text overflowing off the box
  • The game kept bugging and wouldn't let me actually finish it. I was unable to complete the game because every now and then it would register that the ball stopped and wouldn't trigger the next text popup, so it just sat there spinning endlessly

Overall, a good first attempt for a limited time game jam. Don't think of any of this as failure. You submitted something, which is better than many, and any attempt you learn from is a win. I look forward to seeing your next game

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I appreciate you playing and taking the time to provide such thorough and helpful criticism.

I'm so happy you liked the wheel motion and the sounds.

You are entirely correct about the issues and the dearth of meaningful options. I was under a lot of pressure to solo-code the entire game because my crew sadly quit during the jam. To submit a playable build on time, I had to reduce both the scope and the branching logic.

I am absolutely aiming to fix these flaws (particularly the text overflow and the freezing issue) and expand out the choices in an update once the jam is totally done. Your supportive remarks at the end definitely made my day. I learned a lot from this, and I will surely use your notes in my upcoming projects. Thanks again!