Nice entry! Here's my thoughts:
Enjoyment: 5/5
A nice little sweet narrative game, with the twist of having wheel-based mechanics. It felt very nice to play and i didn't really find anything annoying with it.
Creativity and Theme 4/5
Again, the wheel-based mechanics are a fun twist on the classic narrative genre, but that's really the only thing the game offers compared to any standard narrative game. I don't feel like giving it a 5/5 on this, but i think a 4/5 is well deserved :)
Visuals: 4/5
The art looks good and the colors used really work well overall, keeping a cozy, sweet atmosphere. My only complaint here is the other characters beside Stella having what I assume are placeholder assets. It's understandable that the time limitations caused this, but I can't give a perfect score with that. Still very good tho!
Audio: 3/5
The music is nice and the sounds for the minigames fit them well. The only weird thing is that when I clicked play in the main menu the music just lowered a lot by itself, which felt very awkward and made the game much quieter for the entire duration of it. Additionally, i tried pressing the Options button in the main menu beforehand but it just didn't work at all. Maybe that's related to the issue?
Seriousness: 4/5
An office as the main game location was a pretty serious move nonetheless.
Overall score: 4/5
Good job!! :D