There's a finished(?) art&colour version up now, if you fancy a look at it as creator intended. I took your points about moving bits around, which I think does make it a lot more legible. There are probably a few pieces that could benefit from being placed differently, but the various chunks are so inter-related I suspect the 'correct' order might be somewhat open to individual preference. Having talked it out with a couple of other folks, I didn't include much in the way of a system/skill conversion guide, but hopefully it should be somewhat intuitive in the context of a more complete game/system.