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Simonides5 days ago(+1)

I love the look, the visuals are clean, read well to me.  It's making great use of the ASCII conventions, love it. As an innovation, I do enjoy the labeling setup, though I realize it's not as easy to use. But I do like the feel of it, it creates a roguelike ascii-charm to it. Likewise, the use of the smiley face for a corpse is such a nice touch.

Also the complication table being split based on powered/non-powered, but only partially, is a cool solution, I like it.

There seems to be a number of minor layout bugs, I'll point them out just for fixing:

  • Power-section has a sentence cut off, wires leading to the engines...
  • The HEAD statblock covers the Android adjutant entry partially
  • "Adjust to fit session time" box feels like its too big/too close to the text around it
  • Forward airlock is missing the symbol / key. Or I don't know which airlock is the forward airlock? Maybe I'm just missing something.

I think the module would benefit from a "Warden: This is what has happened here" section. It's not terribly clear to me, though I can collect it from the monster and the heads collected.

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Cydmin75 days ago

Thanks so much for the helpful review of the pages! I've added an image of the second page to finish up the Power room description in an above comment, but will be making the fixes to the project files once they are editable after voting. I was wondering if referencing a forward airlock was enough, but with your recommendation I will definitely add a better clarification with something pointing to the right-most airlock on the map. It was somewhat intentional to have text boxes uncomfortably close or overlapping slightly to lean into the feel of a console with error windows or alerts appearing, but I may have gone too far and made it just look unfinished or not gone far enough to really drive the idea home. If you have any thoughts on if I should push it harder with more flavor text getting cut off in other places or pull it back and just make it look cleaner in those areas I'd love to hear them!

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