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This is a narrative and characterization critique then anything, at the start, very start of the game, after Azumi trauma dumped Izuku, learning about her very extreme situation she is in, and later Izuku promising to be that man, protecting her in any way he can while the writting also made it seem Azumi was quite literally grooming Izuku because of how eerily close he looked like to her deadbeat husband that left her with a huge debt to the Yakuza, then it goes on yadda yadda where Izuku promised to protect her and have long unprotected sex with the school nurse.


Then all that accident happened with Izuku's mom and dr heinz came to experiment on him then a 5 Month Timeskip went by, yet the first thing Izuku did is anything but not try to get in contact with Azumi? after all that talk to help her in any way he can, Izuku dumped her like the deadbeat husband, even though I am a new player, it really pissed me off because it really just tried to be edgy and didnt make sense to be that first objective for Izuku, especially the entire Quirk of Izuku slowly being weaker if he isnt keeping his libido up? an easy solution is Azumi, no shot that woman loved Izuku and so does he becuase of what he said, yet Izuku has the gal to question 'how has she been doing as of late' when he knows the Yakuza is breathing down her neck 😐


I'll still give this game a shot becuase of just Azumi, but I really questioned this writting decision because it's being edgy for the sake of it while also making Izuku no better then her husband, even moreso the game insinuating her route is complete even though I just started this game....  so really, the moment Izuku comes back to her, I really hope it wouldnt be half assed and everything is forgiven when they have long sex, so apoligies if this will insult or come out as condescending, this just really bothered me more then anything.

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Thank you for the detailed review.

No, Azumi's story is not finished. We are aware of some issues with the narrative in her route. In fact, Azumi's absence is related to our intention to rework part of the story (especially the section after the prologue), and we do not want to introduce her before that point to avoid doing the same work twice

For now, please consider this part of the game unfinished.

Noted, apoligies again if my comment has given any issues whatsoever.

Your concern was well-founded, so everything is fine. Thank you for playing our game!