The entire Ki system and Warrior path can be interesting to test waters for, altough it is pretty far in the game (mid game) to unlock to corresponding prerequisite, just spitballing here
This is a narrative and characterization critique then anything, at the start, very start of the game, after Azumi trauma dumped Izuku, learning about her very extreme situation she is in, and later Izuku promising to be that man, protecting her in any way he can while the writting also made it seem Azumi was quite literally grooming Izuku because of how eerily close he looked like to her deadbeat husband that left her with a huge debt to the Yakuza, then it goes on yadda yadda where Izuku promised to protect her and have long unprotected sex with the school nurse.
Then all that accident happened with Izuku's mom and dr heinz came to experiment on him then a 5 Month Timeskip went by, yet the first thing Izuku did is anything but not try to get in contact with Azumi? after all that talk to help her in any way he can, Izuku dumped her like the deadbeat husband, even though I am a new player, it really pissed me off because it really just tried to be edgy and didnt make sense to be that first objective for Izuku, especially the entire Quirk of Izuku slowly being weaker if he isnt keeping his libido up? an easy solution is Azumi, no shot that woman loved Izuku and so does he becuase of what he said, yet Izuku has the gal to question 'how has she been doing as of late' when he knows the Yakuza is breathing down her neck 馃槓
I'll still give this game a shot becuase of just Azumi, but I really questioned this writting decision because it's being edgy for the sake of it while also making Izuku no better then her husband, even moreso the game insinuating her route is complete even though I just started this game.... so really, the moment Izuku comes back to her, I really hope it wouldnt be half assed and everything is forgiven when they have long sex, so apoligies if this will insult or come out as condescending, this just really bothered me more then anything.
Also, there is nothing properly explaining to be in a Romantic Relationship, both in game and the Wiki doesnt, if anything I would suspect the feature isnt even added currently as in game even becoming Best Friends doesnt give you the option to date an NPC. (It might due to be specific to an NPC then every NPC, IDK but if thats the case the Wiki didnt even list it out)
Or it could be my Character being Female and most she is close with are females, could be a trait thing locked behind just to unlock it, but with all due respect why do that, all in all I am lost as there is nothing properly explaining it.
This game has potential, but it is unnecessarily complicated, most of the information I would expect the game would explain, either in hints or long tips, or just be in the game, but its intsead on a Wiki that is also currently W.I.P and has most not filled out with descriptions, I understand its mostly by supporters that are making it, but I suspect, with all due respect will be also the decision by Grankor as the Official way to get information for everything (Understandable just so most of the funds would be directed to making the game) I understand if its the achievements, Traits, Tomes & Job Rewards, but its really inconvenient for anything but what I mentioned.
I am quite interested with the 'Love' & 'Obedience' route, as for somoene that did put alot of hours to the point my Jill is Obedience 60.
I'll be looking forward to that, and the QOL changes.
And if possible, once you have acquired enough funds, perhaps have a plan later down the line to slowly add Artists animating for you? No offense with the AI Model you are using, it does look better & clearly more effort is put into it then most games, but with how this game has the potential, its hard to put it into words, but to put it simply, it would be a missed opportunity!
anyways, I'll continue being here for future updates, stay safe Fallstar.
... And I know that I'll be replying again, but I dont like how Victoria's scenes is easily triggered with no way to not let it happen, and how much more abundant her content is compared to the Slime Girl & Nico. (This is a nitpick of mine, it just stirs my Stomach with how much I Abhore Victoria)
... But I genuinely would like to know if there is a permanent way to get rid of Victoria, I understand this is an Erotic game advertised as such with non consent fetish, but really, Despite everything Victoria did to Emma, Emma will still blindly trust her, yes there is that Gym Event that Emma got angry at Victoria, but it ended up like the previous ones where Emma just did nothing despite her resisting her possesions several times before hand, but this one is special? Atleast the psrt where Victoria ended up wearing a Micro Bikini, she made Emma asleep to do that, I dont get it.
Dont take it thr wrong way, its my only criticism of this game, as like the game is advertised, its a corruption game so all of fetishes here are to be expected, but much like corruption games, they tend to have a way to atleast counteract Events and Scenarios that would corrupt the playable character! But this game doesnt try to do that, and has various ways on letting the playable character be corrupted, without any other methods to reduce it or stop it.
I enjoyed your game Dark, the RPG Elements and the progression is fun, the story is OK and its fine, pretty traditional all things considered, the main highlight are the Pixel Arts and CG'a of Characters, they are pretty good.
But, if there is gonna be an option later in the story that would cut off some of this characters who is Sexually Assualting Emma, I would do it in a hearbeat, Victoria, as much as she is not real, irritates me, and somewhat Emma because... I'm gonna be honest, Dark, I feel you intentionally made her not have a backbone when being SA'D, from the gameplay to Erotic scenes, it doesnt make sense to me on why Emma doesnt fight back, she is capable of it, or just atleast an option to the player, because Emma did fight foes that are Strong, and she is getting stronger as the game progresses, but I was just wondering when will you implement Emma to put boundaries, or just snap at the gals she has no choice in letting them live near her or with her, because as Smart as she is, she is Naive, but I see no progression on her maturity despite facing things no girls of her age would cope with normally like her.
The Interactble buttons in the perk tabs, previous two updates before you can interact and read even the maxxed perks, but at the previous update and currently, its no longer possible for interacting with maxxed perks, only works for perks that havent been unlocked/leveled.
I'm not complaining, but I'm pretty sure me leaving in when going to the area to the bathroom where she is taking a shower caused her to being unaware of her Exhibitionist act.
I'm certain you have already gotten this from someone else, but I'll add more to it nonetheless, promising work! & especially the only time I'll overlook AI, as compared to others, yours has more effort put into it (as crazy as that sounds), & being more ambitious as well.
When a good story ends, people want more, they get greedy, and so did I.
For the effort the team worked on this, the OST, writting, tensions & suspense... All of it can only be boiled down to my most simplsets compliments to this game: Absolute Cinema.
A bit buggy in Mobile, at the stat menu when you increase a stat and retract the point, it jusf consumes the SP entirely leaving a potential character not having a single SP on they're stats.
While for encounters, when finishing off a NPC/being finished off, the game doesnt end the encounter, but continues it until said player ends the encounter, but if said encounter cant manually be ended, then it goes on forever.
I'll leave more once I experience this game more of what it has to offer.
From the various Erotic NSFW game, this feels like the only one with a proper indepth Turn Based Combat System that is also quite challenging.
Altough most would just want to get into the meat of the characters and not the difficulty, I have to applaud the effort done to the combat and progression of the game, feels more then a NSFW game ifywIm.
(Bit of a shame there are characters with supposed Affection Progressions not even starting yet, but I digress, It's a nitpick from mine, do whats best for the game)
(Copied my comment from the recent development log)
This is a pretty interesting start for Greek Houses, wasnt expecting anything similar to this when I did suggest it at the discord server way back when, its a good start.
Although, I do think more Niche sport options can be made, what I was thinking was entirely different where you can go solo or just a few tagging along in that said niche sports, like Chess, Weightlifting, Equestrian, Fencing and Rowing... etc.
Considering Esports is included to earn that Degree for Varsity Sports, I can see no harm if any of this could be added to the game as it can also help for the sport options having more diversity when whatever main skill is needed for it (Cheerleading and Mascot needs Dance, Physical is for Football and Swimming and Esports is for VG)
This is a pretty interesting start for Greek Houses, wasnt expecting anything similar to this when I did suggest it at the discord server way back when, its a good start.
Although, I do think more Niche sport options can be made, what I was thinking was entirely different where you can go solo or just a few tagging along in that said niche sports, like Chess, Weightlifting, Equestrian, Fencing and Rowing... etc.
Considering Esports is included to earn that Degree for Varsity Sports, I can see no harm if any of this could be added to the game as it can also help for the sport options having more diversity when whatever main skill is needed for it (Cheerleading and Mascot needs Dance, Physical is for Football and Swimming and Esports is for VG)
Itch Io hopefully should come back to their senses, if this goes any longer I fear a lot of the works many devs such as you will be cut off from there works because of some radical group enforcing payment processors to censor in a unjust manner.
Anyways, most of the reason why this is all happening is Mastercard, Visa, Paypal and Collective shout is making sure to censor any NSFW things, and they wont just stop here.
