I think when I realized I don't have the layout sauce my personal quest is to make a clean adventure that's packed with as much text and GM utility as I can possibly fit in one page haha
I appreciate your feedback! a) Definitely could rewrite this to a save with advantage, I don't know why I didn't think of that. b) Is there any reason that 2d5s is better than 2d4? I could also just use 1d10 but I prefer the center-heavy distributions two dice gives you. c) yea, I went with "bonus action" because I figured the already widely understood meaning might give me better verbal economy, but I understand how that's a double-edged sword since it's evoking rules from a different system. If this continues to be a nitpick for people I'll just take it out.
Thanks again for your kind words and constructive critique!