Its a cool idea, a downtime location that draws the characters in to relieve stress but has a kind of modern sinister AI seduction racket going on. I found the menu on the back pretty unreadable, a script font at that size, light on dark was a challenging decision to justify. Some of the writing suffered from strange arrangement and could have been more brief and more evocative, though overall I like the subject and how it was presented. I am stoked you chose the Nymph as your ancient myth, its a classic and doesn’t get enough play in adventures. Solid entry.
Viewing post in The Velvet Grove jam comments
Thank you for the feedback! I think the menu suffers more in terms of readability in the Services section, because the font size there is smaller (not deliberately).
Update: I made the menu cover the whole width of the back cover page, and increased font size, it looks and reads significantly better.