Thanks for your submission! The concept and themes/questions it produces are very interesting and the double character with one being shared set up is very unique, definitely happy to have it, but since I read through it (not all the programs) anyway, I may as well critique it a bit. I'd like a response if you have a chance, to know that you can be reached at the very least as you'll need to approve the transfer to the bundle when the time comes.
The main "flaw" I think is that there is not an overarching point to the game that I can see, there is no plot and no way to win or really make progress, and if the game was exclusively intended for one shots that would be fine since the focus seems to be exploring themes, relationships, and sci-fi/horror concepts. But... since the game is intended to potentially run over multiple sessions it's a bit hard to see how that could be sustained. As an addendum to this, there is a huge focus on cx score, it seems to be the main source of "progression", but if it has any point beyond acting as a way to track relationships I'm not sure what it is, again fine for one shots but if you want the game to run longer it should probably have some clear purpose or effect given it receives so much focus.
Other minor notes:
4 b tags seems to mean you auto fail checks but this is not explicitly established.
"Write this on a Meatframe Sheet, along with their pronoun (see the section on AnimAL Eti quette , above)"
I thought meat pronouns were always it?
meats should have space to write personality stuff down on char sheets so players can rp them consistently.