I know this is a porn game comment section; you're weird bro. Work on that.
"I know this is a restaurant, but you're such a glutton for eating the food and critiquing it like the chef asked. Work on that."
That's you. That's what you sound like.
(I really wasn't even that raunchy with it, the majority of what was written was general story critique. I bet you didn't read it and assumed it was lustful because I wrote a lot, huh? Shame on you, learn to read lol.)
bro, scroll up. I also wrote a lot. "I know this is a porn game comment section," was a comment that has nothing to do with the porn game and everything to do with its probably fairly weirder audience. Im saying its not that surprising to get some quadruple-chin individuals here because of where, "here," is. You sound like a discord mod! No, this isn't like eating food at a resturant, the dev wasnt asking about your damn inpreg kink, they were asking for advice! (Also, sidenote, who the says, "first lay?" Very, "mallady," coded.) You can be a lil raunchy, this would be the spot to do it, but you shouldnt just be like, "I hate wimp protags, so thats a no go, good story's always a plus, but lets talk about the impreg x-ray real quick... I necessitate that you have it. I dont negotiate with game devs, they always give into... the alpha." And let me just say im not gonna argue with you back n forth til you feel like you're right, this is how you came off to me in that momment, and it felt icky. Thats all.
Well that ain't fair, "I hate wimp protags" - I never said it shouldn't be allowed, just that it's a very cliche character arc and I hope it isn't flat, at the least lower the "wimpiness" a bit, y'know? What I did say is that I " hope his confidence improves and he's not another one-note semi-limp dick-haver who's just there to get used and get off. " Is this not a fair critique?
And what's wrong with "first lay"? I genuinely didn't know what else to write that didn't just say "sex scene" or "scene where they fuck". MB for trying to play around with my words.
And I said nothing along the lines of "I necessitate that you have it. I dont negotiate with game devs, they always give into... the alpha." "The alpha" is a gross character-type, and unless I'm reading a brain-out "MC gets ALL the ladies and has ALL the powers" story, it's just boring. And if you think of ME that way... I mean, I don't know what do say, I tried to be as nice as possible without demanding anything. If you meant the "must have", that's 100% just recommendation lingo - not "this must be in the game or else it will be DOGWATER!1!!1", if they don't have it they don't have it, I'm not gonna berate a story for some small addition like that not being included.
You're putting words in my mouth because "my vibe is off." At the very least you can help me rephrase and reorganize stuff instead of some disrespectful stuff like "work on it; you sound like a discord mod; yadda yadda" Only reason I even mentioned "Big fan of impreg (and pregnancy!" is because, quite literally, the equivalent of "Big fan of hot dogs (and bratwurst!" at a hot dog stand. A bit corny, but not an out of place comment at all - it's an impreg-central game, and I like impreg. Simple.
I like reading and I tried my best to give the best feedback I could because I'd like to see stories like this do well, and if you can ask, inquire, or suggest stuff in its early ages, now is the time to do so. They don't have to listen to me at all, I'm another drop of water in the ocean. I don't have to have my way, nor what I says matters, but this is a comment section where they asked for feedback and what you'd like to see. Now I'll sound like I'm whining, I know, but honestly out of all the spaces to be a cornball, is this not one of them?
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I'm not even trying to be right because there's nothing to be right about. But come on, man. I just like to read and they asked for feedback; I'm just bad at writing it properly. How about dropping some actual advice or good read or two, spicy or not, that I could enjoy instead, rather than insulting me?