Well that ain't fair, "I hate wimp protags" - I never said it shouldn't be allowed, just that it's a very cliche character arc and I hope it isn't flat, at the least lower the "wimpiness" a bit, y'know? What I did say is that I " hope his confidence improves and he's not another one-note semi-limp dick-haver who's just there to get used and get off. " Is this not a fair critique?
And what's wrong with "first lay"? I genuinely didn't know what else to write that didn't just say "sex scene" or "scene where they fuck". MB for trying to play around with my words.
And I said nothing along the lines of "I necessitate that you have it. I dont negotiate with game devs, they always give into... the alpha." "The alpha" is a gross character-type, and unless I'm reading a brain-out "MC gets ALL the ladies and has ALL the powers" story, it's just boring. And if you think of ME that way... I mean, I don't know what do say, I tried to be as nice as possible without demanding anything. If you meant the "must have", that's 100% just recommendation lingo - not "this must be in the game or else it will be DOGWATER!1!!1", if they don't have it they don't have it, I'm not gonna berate a story for some small addition like that not being included.
You're putting words in my mouth because "my vibe is off." At the very least you can help me rephrase and reorganize stuff instead of some disrespectful stuff like "work on it; you sound like a discord mod; yadda yadda" Only reason I even mentioned "Big fan of impreg (and pregnancy!" is because, quite literally, the equivalent of "Big fan of hot dogs (and bratwurst!" at a hot dog stand. A bit corny, but not an out of place comment at all - it's an impreg-central game, and I like impreg. Simple.
I like reading and I tried my best to give the best feedback I could because I'd like to see stories like this do well, and if you can ask, inquire, or suggest stuff in its early ages, now is the time to do so. They don't have to listen to me at all, I'm another drop of water in the ocean. I don't have to have my way, nor what I says matters, but this is a comment section where they asked for feedback and what you'd like to see. Now I'll sound like I'm whining, I know, but honestly out of all the spaces to be a cornball, is this not one of them?
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I'm not even trying to be right because there's nothing to be right about. But come on, man. I just like to read and they asked for feedback; I'm just bad at writing it properly. How about dropping some actual advice or good read or two, spicy or not, that I could enjoy instead, rather than insulting me?