I thought it was good. It was just a bit long-winded, was all. Although, I was expecting a sadder ending, one of longing, considering the title of the story was called Limerence. I was expecting a more bittersweet story, not a hopeful one. That somehow makes it feel as if they didn't have limerence, since they technically mutually reciprocated each other's company and feelings, even if they both didn't entirely realize that. However, having looked up the definition of limerence, I can see the meaning behind it in the context of this story. Again, it was well-written. The pacing was just slow and meandering at times from its purple prose to its descriptive narration.
To give my two cents, I agree with ActiveDayDreamer about the death scene. It's not like this and the protagonist's reaction to it lack verisimilitude, as death (even sudden death) is a normal fact of life and (spoiler) girls are known to cry due to a lot of things that we, men, wouldn't cry over, but maybe they're too sudden from the narrative standpoint, that is, perhaps they do indeed break the flow. For me it wasn't the death itself that seemed odd, but the fact that she cried over it. Previously she talked a lot about the guy and it never seemed to me that her feelings for him were so strong as to merit such a reaction. It almost seems as if she were insincere in her narration, as if she tried to hide her true feelings (which doesn't make much sense, I think, considering the story as a whole), which is why her reaction felt odd. There's not enough foreshadowing to prepare the reader/player for this plot development.
Just my opinion, obviously. Other people might think differently. Also, so as not to provide only criticism of it (in the negative sense of the word), let me say that I think that, compared to Digital Seclusion, Limerence is a much more refined work formally, although personally I prefer the former simply because it was a bolder work in various senses. I also liked the Platonic (as in literally Platonic) tone of your latest VN and would have enjoyed it more if this element had been developed in a way that was intellectually more thorough. I felt that philosophically your work opened up some interesting paths but explored them very little.