Thanks, that's good to know! I see your point about the reaction, and perhaps some better foreshadowing would have helped sell her response better. Although I'm done with Limerence for the time being, this is all useful feedback to consider for when I write future stories
Just my opinion, obviously. Other people might think differently. Also, so as not to provide only criticism of it (in the negative sense of the word), let me say that I think that, compared to Digital Seclusion, Limerence is a much more refined work formally, although personally I prefer the former simply because it was a bolder work in various senses. I also liked the Platonic (as in literally Platonic) tone of your latest VN and would have enjoyed it more if this element had been developed in a way that was intellectually more thorough. I felt that philosophically your work opened up some interesting paths but explored them very little.