Great! Tho personaly seeing the guy here and his women do their thing and facing the hell that's teaching after the hard time to get it open is better watching than a student strugle in a maguc school which there are too many of and would be fare better. Making a student as the protagnest IF you chose to make a sequal well feel like watching boruto while naruto not becoming hukagi in his own show and boruto is regarded as ths best character, which is BS.
Also, one last, piece of advice.
Try to make the dialog more, natural. As there are many parts that can be seen as, sus, if you get what i mean
Ai. Alot of the dialogs looks like they are mad with ai. As long as the flow is good i don't care. But if someone thought you are using ai, which i don't, well through you too much trouble.