Oh! I just noticed there’s a continuation of your comment!
I’m so happy that flirting with Inga didn’t feel cringy to you. And I see your point about MC blushing! I’ll definitely check that and adjust it. It never even crossed my mind when I was drawing her; I just went YEEEE, BLUSH, LET'S GO and put red colour on her :D So thank you for saying it!
There will always be a fight with Haroun Zayne. He simply won’t let you go. If you tried the option where you give him Red, betraying the poor guy (SPOILER ALERT)...
he still attacks you, saying he promised to let YOU go, but not your children. So logically, you have to protect them.
This dude knew you were guilty from the beginning; he was just playing games with you.
However, I was also thinking about an evil playthrough where you give up both Red and the children, and Haroun Zayne leaves you as promised. But that path wouldn’t lead anywhere—it would simply end the game. Maybe I will add this option when the whole story is finished :)
I won’t comment on the other things you mentioned, since they’ll be explained later in the story, eheheheh :)
But I’m really glad you liked the chapter!