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Thank you so much!!I'm so glad you enjoyed:DD

My first game jam was a VN as well, but this one is,, double the length TTuTT. Writing took a bit longer than anticipated, but I was already committed to the story I wanted to tell, so I'm planning to keep working and update the art, even though the jam is over :PP

(Spoilers) 

Jordan was written to put a lot of weight on schedules and routine keeping her safe, so my intention with the waiting ending was that she has chosen to maintain that schedule, even when it's ultimately detrimental. The option being locked if she never accepted Lani's requests was with the idea that she has never deviated from scheduled events, so why would she deviate now? Though I can see how that may have failed to come across. I have considered making some small dialogue changes, so that may be adjusted slightly alongside the art updates.

Thank you again for the comment, I appreciate the feedback:))!!

I played Mirach’s Ghost as well when it came out. If you remember, you and I both submitted VNs to that game jam!

That explanation makes sense. When I played it, that idea about Jordan sticking to her schedule didn’t fully come across to me in that ending, so I think a little more emphasis on that might help players pick up on it.

From what I remember from Mirach’s Ghost, I would say that your writing and pacing has improved a lot in this one, so good job with that! I look forward to seeing what you create in future game jams!