Hey there, Izzy. Thank you for your comment. About the lack of environment/background descriptions, English is not my first language so these childish, poorly written descriptions already took a lot from me. I try to read books and newspapers but those descriptions don't come naturally to me. No wonder it seems like how a 10 years old would write. That's why I focused so much on Zehir's lines. He is the star of the show. I needed to compensate the lack of environment descriptions with character dialogue. I actually would love a native speaker to handle the descriptions I can't write for the life of me for me. As long as your writing doesn't contradict the characters' psychology and behavior(Like for example, you wouldn't be able to refuse Zehir. If you did that, he'd kill you right then and there for "leading him on" and then himself. He's the kind of yandere that throws a tantrum if he doesn't get what he wants from his LI. If that doesn't work, he gets pissed and kills them. He has that in common with the other yandere from another game I created, Louhi. I guess we're just too used to yandere men who would never hurt their LI. Mine are violent. Zehir is also totally the type to speedrun a relationship and ask for marriage after a few days so that sudden kiss wasn't completely out of character.), I'd absolutely love some help, if you're still interested in the kind of yandere Zehir is, ofc. I do think I should give much more options and improve the other characters' dialogue. I guess you already read in the comments that this was rushed. But the project wasn't just lacking due to lack of time, it was because of lack of BUDGET too. I wanted to create something that looks beautiful so I commissioned talented artists to do the job and that was very expensive for me, especially the backgrounds. That's why the players won't get more than a few locations as I can only commission a few backgrounds so I have to be very selective with it. Later I even realized that there are some Zehir's facial expressions that are missing but I decided to deal with it and improvise. Btw, are you an artist? Can I see your work? If you're reading this and you're still interested, I'd love your help.
Overall thank you for your constructive criticism 🙏🏻
