- Immaculate vibes! Art, font, maps, all right on theme.
- Megaman inspiration shines through really well. I didn't see any mention of the other two games you were given though.
- Usability: I think I would have a tough time running this as is.
- Wish recommended # of PC's/PC level was prominently included.
- Map and dungeon rooms descriptions should probably be numbered. At first, I didn't even know I was reading room descriptions (Ancient Weapon section, page 6).
- Encounter table is varied and thematic, but how often do I need to roll for an encounter?
- Creatures are cool but are lacking several of the typical Shadowdark stats. Most don't have interesting abilities/traits or aren't well explained (e.g., constrict limb).
- Character sheets are gorgeous (not sure how functional though).
Gorgeous looking entry that would probably benefit from a revision to increase usability. Very cool!