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Found some text that could use clarifying.

Minor spoiler

After “Descent into Darkness”, the help text saying “once you leave you can’t re-enter via the same entrance” wasn’t clear. I thought it meant that once you took the first action inside that place, you were locked in and would have to leave a different way. It wasn’t clear that if you leave the way you came in without doing anything, you can’t re-enter. Could you phrase it to make this clear, such as “If you return to the campus, you cannot come back to this place via the ladder.”?

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There will be more ways to reenter the Crypt in the future, but I can see why it’s confusing. I’ve reworded it to make things clearer for now.

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Part of why it’s confusing is that it’s help text on the first action. It might help to move the help text to the action that returns, instead.