SFM was one of my favorite VNs all those years back, and playing this newer version now, honestly aged so well. It's not often where I actually grow to like all LIs and you really nailed it.
Some random comments:
- My least favorite ending though is probably Alden's best ending, since it still feels quite sudden for him to reciprocate MC's feelings. Alden's good end was actually sweeter and more realistic I guess.
- I also kinda miss Seth's more "bishie" look in the original, but his current design definitely reflects a more geeky archetype.
- Forgot how much Seth and Cherri roast MC lmao it's hilarious and it's a nice subversion of the typical flawless NLOG MC
- I'm also curious to know what dialogue changes you made, it would be cool if you had some kind of text document with all the changes. Then again I could also just replay the old one side by side lol.
Anyway, regardless of all the nitpicks, all the characters feel so well-rounded and I love the witty writing. If you eventually come back to this project to add CGs or other updates, I be ecstatic! Thank you for sharing this VN and allowing oldies like me to relive good memories. ^^