Aww, thank you for your comment <3
There's a lot of things I'd probably do differently now, but I don't think I'll ever re-revisit SFM or SFMA. Although it's not perfect, it's nice to look back. Unfortunately I don't have a document with the dialogue or anything like that. It's already been 6 years since the remake and I remember at the time I was glad to be rid of some of the old dialogue, it was a product of its time (and the immature me at the time haha).
But if you want to play the old version, you can still find it on my old blog, just click "download old version". I myself was surprised the link still worked lol.
Thanks again so much for playing and remembering the game fondly!