hi! first of all, i love love love the idea of playing as a group of (un)familiars. i don't think i've seen many narratives with that premise, and it has so much potential. it feels so tragic and so fierce at the same time. i love how the experience benchmarks change as your character grows, and how well it ties to the themes of the game. it was seriously a genius idea.
i'd love to learn more about this world, and my only wish is that there was more for the gamekeeper to work with in the way of creating conflict (although that is largely because i want to run the game for my friends and i am very much a beginner GM haha)
if you allow it, i would love to translate this game to brazilian portuguese. i'm working on my portfolio and i've made it something of a personal quest to translate as many games from the Mutal Aid Jam as I can, and this game was an absolutely delightful read. like i said, i want to run this game for my friends, and though some of them do speak english, i also have friends who don't, and i'd love them to read this. i'd send you the translated file once i'm finished, and i'd only ask that you credit me when you post it. of course, if you don't want that, it's no problem! i'll let you know if i do end up running a short campaign. i'm definitely excited to try it!