thanks for the amazing feedback !!! The phrase i need to say depicts that they both want to say it but couldn't say it but the boy tried it at last, i think the direction goes a bit wrong , at first i was trying something else, like creating a 2 choice box and timer for the guy but my lazy ass does not want to work on it and time was low so i change some scene mid cutscene. next time i try to convey the meaning more precisely and last part where there's no outcome i did not add it cause i thought it would be more fun to see what the viewer will think but i guess many of them expected the girl to be isekai'd by a truck or car or something .
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You're welcome. It could work to imply both wish to say they like the other, but it's probably simpler to stick with just the guy's perspective. Or if you do show the girl's perspective, save it until after the guy speaks and she does not hear, but maybe she notices his mouth moving and wistfully thinks it would be nice if he was saying he liked her. "I really should tell him myself, but I'm too shy."