Just bad. Really bad. Don't waste your time to download bad.
It is absolutely bloated with unskippable 'cut-scenes' making it extremely, painfully slow to move forward. Instead of learning about the world through intelligent conversation you're subjected to "thoughts", the bane of any poorly written story, which just drags everything out on top of the cut-scenes.
On the topic of "thoughts"; This is just lame and sloppy. At some point, someone in the Ren'Py creative community added it to a story (presumably) because they lacked any skill to write well. Then, a bunch of grubs wanting to try to cash-in on a new concept (whom also couldn't write eloquently) thought it was some writing talent to mass dump exposition as "thought"; Saving them from having to actually write conversations which could impart the world lore in a more natural way. This is an extremely horrific offence to writing. Everyone should make a stand against this lazy writing. Say no to "thought exposition dumps". Whilst it may be pertinent to add a random thought occasionally to clarify the MC's perception; It is outright horrific to dump exposition or NPC thoughts. It is just pathetic.
There are many stories on this site which have far better writing. Go enjoy those. Say no to "thought dumps".