Really good VN can't wait to see more of this VN, I really have only have two small problem with the VN Diego neck I feel like his neck is a little to long other then that I like Diego. secondly, the scene with the characters can feel a little to short sometime but a really good VN in all keep up the good work :D
I agree with this. It's a great start to a VN with a few minor things that I would like to see changed. Diego's interestingly long neck being one, short screen time of characters being second, and some slight grammatical errors being the third. On and off note though, I do quite like the character designs. Good luck with this project and have fun with it.
Thanks for the feedback! We'll be tackling the neck issue in an update for the demo coming very soon. As for the length of the scenes, we're planning on revisiting the first few days and beefing them up a bit on our next public demo release, so stay tuned for that!