I'm about to replay this game again, but there is one spoiler for chapter 2 that I want to raise concerns with.
I know this has been brought up already, but you have GOT to change the ending for chapter 2. That bedroom scene was so uncomfortable to read, and the GOOD OPTION was to not defend yourself from this guy who randomly started to be almost predatory. I also feel the twist could be led up to more since it felt like the big doggo was going to be the main love interest but wasn't. Now that itself is a decent twist, but it wasn't built up before that, well, other than him being protective, which could be explained away since this random homeless guy just started hanging with bro's crush, and took room in the house. I will re-read the novel and I will change my comment and admit I was wrong if the twist was built up more than I remember. I still love the VN but, that chapter was just not very good in the twist and MC action department.