Haha! Valid. The revamps are in the works and Chapter 2 is the sole reason why I havent gotten that far with the revamp cause it was so difficult to try and understand Ross as a character, he wasnt meant to be predatory-ish but when I came back to read through it, it was definitely very much the first major ambience change within Rainbow, I'm still working it out and fix Ross' character to a more...concrete trait, thank you...🫶✨
Thank you! Currently, RAINBOW is undergoing a few story changes and an overall revamp to better fit my view of rainbow, alongside the next update will be the introduction of Chapter 4! So, yeah, progress are slow due to my irl situation but I hope many would still keep an eye out for the next major update ❤️🩹
Well, Rainbow is undergoing a revamp as of now, ranging from dialogues, Illustration and Sprites. As of now, I’ve completed the Sprites and are working on the dialogues and illustrations. The dialogues wouldn’t take that long (depends on my creative energy) while the illustrations might be a lot longer since there are some new additions to the gallery. So, worst case scenario prolly somewhere in March 2026, however take my words with a grain of salt.
Thanks! I'm still surprised that my VN could still pull readers in haha! The grammar and errors does stem from me writing everything really late at night, so that would explain it. So, expect them to be fix in the revamp update :P
I have to say you have your ways with words, buddy! It's impressive, and you are correct. Things are bound to become even more strange and challenging for Rayne from here. Major changes are happening to the VN, and I hope you are just as excited as the rest of the readers. Please, stay tune for Chapter 4 ! 😊
(It was also very fun to read your comment, thank you for commenting too!)
The loved yet guilty ending is the cannon and true ending for the storyline. However, there are also the best ending that supports the least emotional restraint that the story has to offer. Which is just an ending that will leave the readers with a good taste. Whichever ending you get, Rainbow is supposed to be played based on your choices for Rayne alone. What you made Rayne choose shapes how he is viewed by others c:
Though if you still hate leaving Westway with the feeling that Sultan hates you, you can try to get the "Best" ending, that should leave the readers such as yourself with a better closure as the chapter ends ✨👍
Thank you! Well there's a lot to go through with this current build because errors could be seen everywhere from bugs to grammatical...though, I assure you that I'm working to improve the game soon and I hope it will still live up to your ratings, my dear reader ✨🥹
I appreciate your efforts in sitting through my little VN! Thank you! As for the next update, it's on the making; major changes are coming in soon, though I wouldn't want to spoil that much. So... 🤭
Thanks! As of now, I'm currently planning the lore of the last few chapters and will be doing a few changes to the storyline and UI designs but all that will begin in 2025 because I currently have something going on. So I hope you and the everyone else would be waiting for it! :∆
Thank youuuu!!! Your review got me giggling like a girl because they do have a wholesome connection, don't they?
OH WELL!! Time to move! Seems like Sultan's involvement is no longer needed! Rayne fixed his problems, so I couldn't fine any other reasons to bring him back in future episodes! (JK...maybe...)
Thanks for reading Rainbow! I hope you're looking forward for chapter 4; coming in early 2025! 🫰✨
Awh! Thanks! I'm just trying my best. As for the next chapter, yeas, it'll be quite crazy but episode are gonna be releases on their owns not in pairs anymore. It depends on how much free time I have...but, but! I'll be sure to keep the updates in track...I hope.
I like comments that expressed their reactions well, like yours! It's very fun to read your review of my VN and it really gave me motivations to continue with the story!
I do agree that Ross's character was a bit lost during chapter 1 and chapter 2 because I was struggling to understand how he is as one of the casts. Ross was supposed to be a close and sympathetic friend but the undeveloped writings made it looked like he's more of a creep...so, let's hope that the revamp I made to certain situations involving Ross is more explained after the build 4.0 (certain dialogues were altered...)
Regardless, I'm happy that you're sticking with the VN after your first read! I promise to keep updating it as much as I could 😊✨👍
Actually, Rayne never was supposed to get shot, so I'm not sure where you got that ending from... That must be just a little error is the script but as if now, I still couldn't find what is the cause of it :v
Okay...This has become a reoccuring problem... I may or may not have made this chapter way to complex than it needs to be...but I don't blame any of you, I admire your spirits in trying to get all the endings of Sultan's chapter. Besides, who doesn't love this Rude-driven, harsh yet considerate, condescending and probably a little sadistic Lion?
I should have a devlog in explaining how to get all of Sultan's endings. If you're still interested, go and check it out! 👍
The farewell sultan two illustrations of rayne, and those two illustrations have two different variants whether you were in Iris's costume or you were in your butler when the chapter ends
Hope this clears up why there are a lot of pages of the illustration in the batch :∆
No that's not it either...To get his gift, You'll need to:
1. Obey Cameron and refuse last second (ep 2)
2. Save the vhs tape (ep 4)
3. Be a good butler and wake him up early (ep 5)
4. Help Sultan treat his father's wounds (ep 6)
To get a gift you'll need to at least do three of these correct choices. Only then will Sultan gave you his farewell gift.
(Btw, this system is used for all chapters. So if you want to get all the farewell gifts keep that in mind!)
The performance menu could also be used as a reference whether the choice you've picked is good or not.
Additionally, the other choices would be Sultan's "interogations" about his mother's murder, the questions hinted this, however he's very subtle with it.
Whatever you chose during these three questions will determine whether Sultan deemed Rayne as Guilty or Innocent 🤫
Perhaps the ending you've got is the neutral ending, in which Sultan lets you go without knowing the true murderer and does not see any potential relationship between him and Rayne. Btw the card that he gives is NOT Sultan's farewell gift. Sultan's chapter has 4 endings in general, you can keep trying to get the other endings!
I'm not sure how you all keep getting the issue, all the gadgets I tried did not encounter the same problem. To answer your question, the black screen is within the scripts yet it's not supposed to send you to the to be continued screen. I couldn't tell what was causing the problem and the elast I could do is advice you to try the rest of the endings (Besides, I'm pretty sure you go the bad ending anyways, there's like four different ways how Sultan sends you off)
I hope my essay could help you get some closure with Sultan's chapter!
