I like comments that expressed their reactions well, like yours! It's very fun to read your review of my VN and it really gave me motivations to continue with the story!
I do agree that Ross's character was a bit lost during chapter 1 and chapter 2 because I was struggling to understand how he is as one of the casts. Ross was supposed to be a close and sympathetic friend but the undeveloped writings made it looked like he's more of a creep...so, let's hope that the revamp I made to certain situations involving Ross is more explained after the build 4.0 (certain dialogues were altered...)
Regardless, I'm happy that you're sticking with the VN after your first read! I promise to keep updating it as much as I could 😊✨👍
Actually, Rayne never was supposed to get shot, so I'm not sure where you got that ending from... That must be just a little error is the script but as if now, I still couldn't find what is the cause of it :v
Okay...This has become a reoccuring problem... I may or may not have made this chapter way to complex than it needs to be...but I don't blame any of you, I admire your spirits in trying to get all the endings of Sultan's chapter. Besides, who doesn't love this Rude-driven, harsh yet considerate, condescending and probably a little sadistic Lion?
I should have a devlog in explaining how to get all of Sultan's endings. If you're still interested, go and check it out! 👍
The farewell sultan two illustrations of rayne, and those two illustrations have two different variants whether you were in Iris's costume or you were in your butler when the chapter ends
Hope this clears up why there are a lot of pages of the illustration in the batch :∆
No that's not it either...To get his gift, You'll need to:
1. Obey Cameron and refuse last second (ep 2)
2. Save the vhs tape (ep 4)
3. Be a good butler and wake him up early (ep 5)
4. Help Sultan treat his father's wounds (ep 6)
To get a gift you'll need to at least do three of these correct choices. Only then will Sultan gave you his farewell gift.
(Btw, this system is used for all chapters. So if you want to get all the farewell gifts keep that in mind!)
The performance menu could also be used as a reference whether the choice you've picked is good or not.
Additionally, the other choices would be Sultan's "interogations" about his mother's murder, the questions hinted this, however he's very subtle with it.
Whatever you chose during these three questions will determine whether Sultan deemed Rayne as Guilty or Innocent 🤫
Perhaps the ending you've got is the neutral ending, in which Sultan lets you go without knowing the true murderer and does not see any potential relationship between him and Rayne. Btw the card that he gives is NOT Sultan's farewell gift. Sultan's chapter has 4 endings in general, you can keep trying to get the other endings!
I'm not sure how you all keep getting the issue, all the gadgets I tried did not encounter the same problem. To answer your question, the black screen is within the scripts yet it's not supposed to send you to the to be continued screen. I couldn't tell what was causing the problem and the elast I could do is advice you to try the rest of the endings (Besides, I'm pretty sure you go the bad ending anyways, there's like four different ways how Sultan sends you off)
I hope my essay could help you get some closure with Sultan's chapter!
Me too, honestly, I can't get along with Sultan's chapter. To much to process. I'm just looking forward for []'s Chapter and probably everyone else's after that too... ✨👌
