Love the music!
Also, there is a lot of depth in the story - I can tell that you really fleshed out these characters, and I was intrigued to see where the story would go!
There were a lot of story points where my character would say something and I wished I could have had a hand in it. I did like being able to choose the romantic options, though. (hee)
I liked both the character designs separately but I did feel like it was a little strange to have two such different art styles/shading in the same game. I wonder if you could add some filter/change the lighting or shading on the characters to make it a little more harmonious with itself.
I wonder...would you be able to choose to date the male vs female character? It kinda seems like you should! Good luck on making the final game.