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Creative Use of Bezi Ghost - Great idea using the Bezi ghost as a part of the tutorial system. I wish he'd been incorporated a little more into the gameplay itself!

General Fun - Pretty solid game loop. Felt like the beginnings of something really cool! I can definitely see this as being an indie sleeper hit once you've had time to polish it up and juice the systems a bit more.

Art and Visuals - Really, really solid. Very cool aesthetic, very cool atmosphere. I really enjoyed walking around and chatting with the crew, just to get an idea of where their heads were at. I wish there was a bit more feedback when I fed the monster! I wasn't sure if I'd done it successfully until I noticed the stomach UI in the corner.

Unique Mechanics - Fishing and cooking aren't necessarily unique, but when wrapped up in the narrative of being the ship's cook for a mad captain, it takes on a whole new identity. 

Overall - Awesome work! Really enjoyed and and am definitely looking forward to seeing what this game becomes once you've had a chance to "cook" a bit!

thank you so much for your feedback! really helps the project :))

the whale will be fully animated + text popups for the monster feeding feedback