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Super engaging story, I enjoyed that a lot! I loved the amount of world building you were able to build in such succinct passages! My piece of constructive criticism is that agency felt a little lacking. I can only recall two choices I got to make and it wasn't terribly clear what either of them meant. The first choice I remember was when you had the option to use the Divya which I hadn't figured out the significance of yet, and then didn't have an option to not use it later. Other than that, the story and dialogue were really well written, the voices of the characters were really distinct, and I liked it a lot! Great job!

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Yeah I agree about the agency, the word count gutted my full version.  I had to strip the agency out sadly, there was like 3-4 choices that mattered originally natural winding but it was 3100 words.