Other than cozy, I was a little tense/worried from reading the story. I was concerned for the child. I can see how this presentation can be built into a full narrative and description novel type adventure. I noticed the calendar issue and wish you luck fixing that. Not seeing the day change was of course off-putting, especially since I wasn't sure where the story or my choices would end.
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Hope you enjoy my Cozy Fall Jam 2025 'SMNIISUBSO'.
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