This is the first time I've reviewed a VN that's heavily focused on NSFW content, but I always like to give constructive feedback on projects where an author has put passion and effort into it.
For your first project and a demo I loved most of the writing, as it took me about an hour and a half to read the routes, interactions, and the partially hidden sections.
However, there's some spelling errors and the lack of music, which is one of the essential components to feeling the emotion of the moment in the corresponding scenarios.
But it's all appropriate for what you want to build and design in the story.
Regarding the characters, I still need to see more in future updates for them to be remarkable, but they fit the introductory function.
As for the visual novel, there's still a lot to polish, especially in the interfaces and code, as I've noticed a lot of bugs with the reputation system and the quick menu screens. I'll provide more details in the Bugs section later.
For the future plans I've read about, you'd have to first see if it's feasible to implement it within your novel, as there are certain mechanics that require more complex coding, not only using Renpy but also Python.
However, it's up to you as a developer whether you want to do it or seek help with that.
Great work, Munch!
P.S. I almost forgot, but do you think you could expand your visual novel to other platforms? I know Android can be very difficult to export, and you can do it later, but when it comes to Mac or Linux, it's easy to do since it uses the same process as the PC version.
This way, you can make your visual novel accessible to a wider audience without relying on just one platform.