That's perfectly understandable, and I'm glad that you were willing to release this in English despite the limitations! How do you propose that I offer these suggestions to you? Should I compile the issues I see and put them in something like a spreadsheet? Perhaps a column that lists the original line, another column for corrections I've made, and the last column to explain my reasoning for it?

Thank you! I have the link bookmarked now, so you can remove it to prevent anyone else from sending you guys suspicious files. I don't have an estimate on when I'll be done with this, but I'm hoping to get a couple of chapters done per day if that's any indication.