Sure, we can do that. It is said that translations are best carried out by people native in the language that is being translated to, which we unfortunately are not.
That's perfectly understandable, and I'm glad that you were willing to release this in English despite the limitations! How do you propose that I offer these suggestions to you? Should I compile the issues I see and put them in something like a spreadsheet? Perhaps a column that lists the original line, another column for corrections I've made, and the last column to explain my reasoning for it?