Thank you so much for such a kind and thoughtful comment!!!!
I really appreciate it. I'd be happy to read and rate your vn. :)
Thank you for the feedback as well. You probably understand well that when you work on something for a while sometimes you become blind to it's flaws. The jarring tone shift was something I hadn't noticed in the slightest, I'll be sure to revise and expand this part of the story so it doesn't lose that emotional feel to it. I kinda started rushing and got a little panicky about not having something done in time. And all your text recommendation is great, I wanted to change the font but I'm kinda terrible at picking fonts. Lol.
I was really nervous to share this but your comment alone has made all the panic worth it. :)
(I hope you'll consider leaving a rating on it. No pressure though.)