...Wow.
That was... AMAZING! OMG, this is probably my favorite one so far!!! ^^
I absolutely ADORE the art direction, the simple, monotone colors work really well, and of course the blood serves to contrast perfectly with it!
I genuinely cried halfway through, not even gonna lie. The only thing I have however, is halfway through it shifts from being emotional, to being sort of magical, which somewhat gives the reader a bit of emotional whip-lash, but omg the game is so good! The animations are on-point, ESPECIALLY the Girl in the mirror hovering, that was genuinely FANTASTIC work!
The UI art is also super nice! The only thing I'd change is the font, sense everything else is really worn-out and flawed, the font being default kind of throws off the feeling. I'd reccommend a type-writer or handwritten one with a color that contrasts to the UI. ^^
Besides those two issues, everything else was FANTASTIC! For real, my absolute favorite submission so far, it gave me the feels, and the girl's design is so cool, with the long hair and all.
Good luck with judging, I have a lot of confidence in you! :D
OH, also, if you don't mind, do you think you could possibly play/rate my game? It's also the first time I've made a visual novel too! ^^
Anyways, sorry for writing so much, good luck with the jam!!!! ^^