You are an artist after all, so if you think that this dialog should be this long - it’s totally reasonable decision. So my take is only valid from the marketing perspective - the faster player can actually start playing, the better.
And in anyway congratulation on releasing the game! You are just one of 2 000 brave souls out of 7 (or 8 now?) billion people on Earth who made the game from scratch that week!
Yes, I am an artist and writer at heart and prefer games with more story! But, I do understand that perspective may be a bit niche, as a lot of players play games for the gameplay. So what's important to me is finding a balance between the two. This was probably my least story-oriented game, actually, so I think that I'm at least improving! Now I just need to figure out how to make the gameplay part more engaging! Thank you again~ :)
