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A jam submission

Cool Building Architecture Ep 0 Winter Sunlight (Impressions Composing Jam Ambience 3)View project page

Submission for Impressions Composing Jam Ambience 3
Submitted by hoanglongplanner (@long_planner) — 6 hours, 6 minutes before the deadline
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Link to Streaming Service (YouTube Recommended)
https://soundcloud.com/dummytexas/sets/cool-building-architecture-ep-0

Description
This is called Cool Building Architecture; we want to make music to reflect the beauty of building stuff. We not sure why you would want to build stuff in Alaska but sure why not?

Description of Setup (Optional but recommended)
FL Studio, AIR Hybrid 3, Vital

Lessons Learned
Not really? In arrangement, we mostly prioritize the feeling of the vibe and tension.

We are used to making long tracks, we tried to learn how make a condensed version of it.

This is the first time we utilize utauloid vocal - Kyou Hana.

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HostSubmitted

Unfortunately, this submission far exceeds the 6 minute limit and I had to disqualify it.

I set this limit to make it fair to everyone getting their tracks reviewed, as well as out of respect for the time of everyone participating in the review process.

Developer

That's okay, we understand.

Although we done this around 2 days, just something you can reference.

Submitted

I'd not classify this as ambient, you could have pulled it off with some minor changes, actually could had been something interesting, even if not very correlated with the theme.

I think the voice added nothing, honestly completely threw me off, I couldn't finnish the song.

I'd explore that track and turn it into something diferent, there sure is some potencial in there, and the mix is not bad, so keep grinding :)

Take care!

Submitted

Some of the instruments, especially the vox, are way to loud in some parts. This doesn't feel ambient or close to the theme either, it sort of just feels like a dance loop with a single repeating vocal hit put over it. For a track over 6 minutes there should have really been some more movement if the direction you were taking was dance loop + Llama style vox. This isn't really a bad track, the vocal hits are just randomly thrown around and their changing velocity is a real distraction and makes it a bit hard to listen to at higher volumes. 

Developer

What do you define as ambient?

(If you based on your own taste, it won't work for everyone)

Submitted

usually ambient music is defined by not having a definitive beat and is created to enhance an atmosphere rather than be the main focus