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Nice track, 

I felt the mix needed more space, everything seems very compressed, regarding the atmosphere and composition, I digged the creepy vibe, there some weird harmonies and dissonants there, not all worked, but the for the ones that did I think it was worth the risk when composing, so I have that mixed feeling.

Good submission! Take care :)

A great ambient track, really well set atmosphere, very good spatial mix and sound design!

I was hoping to get a bit more movement at a point, but the composition holds up tight for ambient!

Great submission! Take care :3

Really cool track! I love the atmosphere and tension it makes one feel.

I just have some mixed feelings on the percussion, I like it on the beginning of the track when it first comes in, but by the end it felt a bit out of place.

Great submission! Take care :3

Got a bit lost with the link there, but any way good track!

I think you could tweek some stuff in the mix and sound design, some stuff is too forward and a bit harsh too.

Composition wise, I liked it, but the drums drew me off a litle bit, better pacing and placing, also tweek the sound a bit, its too distracting.

Good submission! Take care :)

Good sense of atmosphere, I'd say to pace it a bit slower and create more space, it feels a lil busy at parts.
Sometimes less is more ;)

Good job! Take care :)

Damn, I believe this one will be my pick for the jam.

Great sense of atmosphere overall, flawless use of percussion elements, honestly Sand and Towers is an amazing track, its one of the best ambient tracks I personally heard, and i mean outside the jam, so congrats!

I would question some sound design choices on the second track, It's not the mix, that is pretty top notch, but I feel quite a loss of intensity from one to the other, but of course this could have been your intention all along (all long, all along), but with no referreance to it on the description I had to point it out.

Anyway, amazing submission! Take care :3

I believe this to be the most ambiental of the orchestral pieces I heard so far, really good sense of atmosphere.

I love the song progression and some keys caught me off guard each is always a pleasant experience :)

Mixing is pretty tight, but I think some texturing might be missing, instrument spacing is tight, but needs some more vibrance?

Amazing job! Take care :)

What a sub Jiggy, damn.
The Frozen Waste and The Horizon Fractures, damn boi!

I liked all the tracks, but not all seem ambient, 1st one seemed like tomb raider menu song wach I loved, althgough I found the srings to be to much in your face and took me of the vibe.

Execution is good, but in some songs the strings are to much in the spotlight in my opinion, and instruments a bit harsh overall, maybe overcompressed, which does not help the sense of atmosphere

Great job! Take care :3

Nice work! Themewise this was an aproach I was not expecting, but it seems to fit well with the painting!

I think you need some work done on it to really get it to be an ambient track, I felt some lack of sense of atmosphere, I'm guessing just a few texturing here and there, the composition itself seems fit for the genre

Great work! Take care :)

Amazing pieces!

I wouldn't classify part 1 as ambient tho, but as an OST orchestral piece just hits it perfectly.
I think the mix could use some work, but mostly around the low-mids, probably compression issues, not that its totally out there, but for the feel you went I beliee there might be a bit too much,

Composition is very very good, I always like storytelling aproaches.

Great job! Take care :3

Awesome atmosphere feeling, really loved the passage at 1:35, really amazing!

I think mix and sound design are awesome, but I would move some of the textures more to the "back", but this aint even a "critique" just a personal choice

One of my favorites of the jam, keep it up!

Great job, take care :3

The shift middle song got me thinking this were two tracks, bold transition!
Really loved the first half of the song, completely immersed.

The mix and use of percussion are one of the best I heard so far in the jam!

Great job! take care :)

Very sci-fish for the theme in my opinion, kind of a  wandering feeling, not as much lost ship wreck.

I think the mix could use some work, it should improve the sense of atmosphere.

Good job! Take care :)

Waht an ear candy of a wonderfull piece of music, congrats, it's beautiful!

The only thing is that it doesn't quite fit my concept of ambiance, a bit too busy, and more emotional than atmosphery

Great job tho!! Take care :)

Really enjoyed the submission, I think it would have benefited from a slower pace and lower tone(mostly on the first track), but mixing and composition are on spot, barely noticed the switch between tracks flawless transition id say!

Good job! Take care :)

Nice piece but felt the a atmosphere a bit lacking, the mix is a bit harsh at times and I'd believe you should give more space to the instruments.
Really enjoyed the composition and it kinda fits the painting!

Good job, take care :)

Really enjoyed the piano and the texturing, really nice orchestral with good atmosphere!

Great submission! Take care :3

Really enjoyed the outro of the song!
It's  aa nice piece but I felt some room and heavyness(bass), maybe the synth (although awesome tone) were not the best fo the painting.
Some harshness in the mix mix too, maybe that took a bit from the sense of atmosphere too.

Good job! Take care :)

This is an unreasonbly good track! But I don't feel this as ambient, the sound design and mix are top notch, but there is just too much of everything going on, its hard to get trully immersed.

Great song! Take care :) 

Good lo-fi jam, very chill, not very ambient but still a good sense of atmosphere.
Not really what I'd correlate with the theme, but its not completely out there.
Good mix and although I'd love to see a bit of differentn movement the loop still holdsup.

Good job! Take care :)

Good song man, a bit too busy for ambient in my opinion, but I think its just the arpegio in the back, maybe give it some verb, throw it in the back and automate for it to ondulate a little bit, I think that might work, the rest of the track seems right on point!

Tae care! :)

Exceptionally produced, great job!

I love the intro, and think it was a very creative aproach to the theme, the drums took me off the "vibe" at first , but it just grooved :)

Great submission! Take care

Interesting approach no doubt, but I think it would be a better fit for this theme just an exploration of the middle part of the song.
Also some instruments seem to be fighting a bit and a bit harsh, but maybe its to give the 8-bittish feel.

Good job, take care :)

Wow, this one is on my my favorites for sure!
Very tight mix and very cinematic / cult movie vibe!

Amazing sub, take care :3

Amazing use of foley on the track,  not as easy as it seems to pull of.

Some instruments imaging could be improved in the mix.

I could see this for the begining of a cutscene, I do fear that the foley is too essential to the track, not just texturing the sound, so as an amb track for a game it could not work as well, other than a intro cutscene to something.
Even the ending of the piece sugests it almost as an "intro"to something else.

But I see you went for more of storytelling approach, I do love that!

Good job, take care :)

Great feel of atmosphere and very well paced, for someone's 1st experience with ambiance I'd expect a much busier composition, furtunately you nailed it!

You used the wind samples very well, I've heard some others that weren't able to pull that off, and I do love a well used sample, but in this case, I see the amb track for a game, the wind FX will be there, what you need is something for the background to maintain atmosphere when its not, but not be the game atmosphere itself (hope I'm getting the point across well)

Great submission! Take care :3

I think the tracks biggest issue is the sounddesign/mixing, you don't have a great feel of atmosphere because the sound has no body, I think trying to make that with the wind sound didn't help, maybe many octaves lower and a drone would worked way better.

Also the track is a bit busy but I really enjoyed some of the piano lines, I see great potential in this!

Good job, take care!

Really enjoyed the song it self, but sometimes it feels to busy and takes you away from the ambience and immersion.

Composition is good I liek the progressions and melodies, in the mixing side I felt soem freq fights and some instruments a bit too loud in my gear.

Great job, take care :)

Damn I love that initial build up, very well done!
Mixing sounds great in my gear!

The track has a very good sense of atmosphere, but I never had the feeling of being "lost" in the song, maybe the war drums pacing for too long in the song, not sure, beacause the pad chord prog and  timbre/sound feels fit for sailors lost in a freezing sea

Anyway amazing job! Take care :3

I'd not classify this as ambient, you could have pulled it off with some minor changes, actually could had been something interesting, even if not very correlated with the theme.

I think the voice added nothing, honestly completely threw me off, I couldn't finnish the song.

I'd explore that track and turn it into something diferent, there sure is some potencial in there, and the mix is not bad, so keep grinding :)

Take care!

I think this a solid job, and mixing wise for the time you made ityou can be proud, very coherent and controlled.
This has a industrial vibe and got ya some extra points on creativity, I get some silent hill vibes, I would have expanded "Rough" a lil bit, it has a lot going on, making it longer and more spaced between motif would be cool IMO

Thank you for sharing, good job! Take care :3

Certainly not what I was expecting from the image and being ambient and all, but I did like it, from the title I could imagine this as the track for a Metal Slug lvl
I think you have some uncontroled freq. (maybe the bass/synth) not sure, but first listen kinda hurt my ears a bit
Good job, thank you for sharing! Take care :)

Wow what well spent 14min, just wonderfull work!

The end of destruction is just so much, I felt the hairs in my arm start to spike (which always a good sign) probably my fav section, although your consumation was also one of the best interpretation I've hear in the jam, kudos mate! Desolation's middle part caught me a bit of guard, but I really enjoyed it and you manage to bring it down again jus perfectly

I have nothing to say about your mix, just on point one of the best in the jam too, if you ever wanna give some pointers i'm all ears :D

You ended up being my last one, thats what I call (as we say in my homeland) "acabar em grande"!

Great job, take care :3

Cool track! I think you captured the feeling for the painting

Mix and composition were really good, mostly that airy drone really gave it a feeling of desolation, one thing that seemed to be missing a bit was a bigger low end, other than that tops

Great job, take care :3

Hey there, really cool submission

Loved the Consumation and Destruction parts, and the passage itself, felt very alive, think you got the paintings feeling on point

Mix is pretty good and didn't feel midi'sh which is never easy to do!

Great job, take care :3

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave your feedback!

Rude? No, not at all! All feedback is good feedback, I want to grow as much as I can

I have yet to listen to it (ridiculous I know) and honestly now I'm just going to listen after I rated ail the entries (like4/5 last, no biggie) but I know what flute you are talking about, and I agree, was not very happy with the VST sound already when composing, but you know, not much time xD

Take care :3

Thank you so much for taking the time to give your feedback!

I'm very happy to read this, it was a challange I did love and I was  pretty happy overall when I was exporting it and been happier with the feedback

I think track 8 will always be my favorite too even after I revisit the project and properly finish it

Take care :3

Thank you for your feedback! 

 It was trully an effort to get this much done knowing I'd have so little time, I'm really happy the intertwining of the songs and their elements did their job with the story.

Still haven't heard yours as I didn't find a link for a streaming, will go over it tomorrow along side the last 4, I do have quite expectation :D

Take care!

Those chants on are awesome! gives extra soul to it

I really like the composition overall, but I felt the consumation piece to be too little, it is pretty no doubt, but I was expecting more grandeur on it,  I see its incomplete but it shows, didn't feel it so much on destruction (wanted more yes, does it feel incomplete, not really).

Desolation was my favorite, and one of my favorites in the whole jam tbh.

Good job, take care :)

Loved the orchestral / electronic mix, not an easy mix to pull and I think you did it flawlessly, only things I have to say would be, some times the midi'sh, its rare but there are a few horns that give that away and (this is more of a personal opinion) I was not a big fan of the piano timbre you chose

Composition was pretty good, I think you could had given a bit more grandure to the consumation section

Great job, take care :)