I think this a solid job, and mixing wise for the time you made ityou can be proud, very coherent and controlled.
This has a industrial vibe and got ya some extra points on creativity, I get some silent hill vibes, I would have expanded "Rough" a lil bit, it has a lot going on, making it longer and more spaced between motif would be cool IMO
Thank you for sharing, good job! Take care :3