Some of the instruments, especially the vox, are way to loud in some parts. This doesn't feel ambient or close to the theme either, it sort of just feels like a dance loop with a single repeating vocal hit put over it. For a track over 6 minutes there should have really been some more movement if the direction you were taking was dance loop + Llama style vox. This isn't really a bad track, the vocal hits are just randomly thrown around and their changing velocity is a real distraction and makes it a bit hard to listen to at higher volumes.