I guess I could have expressed myself better.
In my previous comment I started giving ideas for your story. I realized I shouldn't be doing it, so I tried to play it smart and stopped myself mid-sentence, but it sounded like I was saying "wouldn't it be nice if you did the thing you already did?", My bad.
Anyways, ignore my story feedbacks, and please consider the gameplay feedbacks. The mouse activity was taking me away from the story.
cheers