Good effort. I feel like RPG Maker might have gotten in the way of what you were trying to build.
Copy/Paste of Rubric:
- Fun: I found the control input to be frustrating. The latency between clicking on something and the laser coming out was distracting and the gameplay felt more like learning the counterintuitive quirks of a system than gaining mastering over the actual game mechanics. -1
- Creativity: Lots of original art. Gameplay reminds me of Tempest. I’m leaning +1 because of the amount of creative content, even if the gameplay hurts it.
- Fetish Factor: The concept is alluring, and I like the mild panic from the partner.
- Theme: I suppose travelling into someone’s body counts. +0