This is a pretty good visual novel! The writing is solid, especially for a jam. I've come to expect story-heavy jam games to feel rushed, but this didn't at all. The art is very nice, especially the character art. The combat was a nice touch, though it did get a little repetitive strategy-wise.
That ending though. What a place to stop, haha. Really nice entry, great work!
Thank you! :)
I had a lot of trouble with the writing, since English isn't my first language and also because I've never written a short story before so I don't have much experience writing fiction. I'm so glad that the end result is alright!
Yeah, I also noticed that the combat is repetitive when I was testing it, but I didn't know how to spice it up in an easy way. I was thinking of using a finite state machine (which I'd just found out about recently) so that the enemies can heal, defend, etc, but I thought that maybe I wouldn't be able to figure out how to implement it in time for the jam...
