"you made a deal with a greedy namby pamby.." Now I've read a fair few Mork Borg adventures, I'm gonna bet that this is the first time this description has been used in one. Obviously a Mork Borg PC would spit on the floor in disgust after describing someone like this!
Love the drawings and maps, they look like you tore through the paper in your ferocity to get the marks on the pages. Perfect Mork Borg style.
There's tons of stuff going on in the adventure, so will keep the soloist going for ages. Mr Giant Brain has already commented on the fontsize, a rerelease in a larger font and giving yourself space to breath would make it easier on the eye when playing- plus provide the opportunity to put in more pictures!
I enjoyed reading this adventure, good job.