Thanks for the feedback!
1. That's what I want your Mork Borg PC to despise the person who is greedy and pretends that they "raided a temple" where in reality they are spotlight hogging it. you are doing all the horrible work. (hey you can give that guy a "surprise" as karma instead of the knife!) that's how mork borg works.
2. Thanks for the comment about my sketches. I love doing these drawings weather pen or pencil! I aim for that old school paperback novel style.
3. I tried my hardest best not to break the 4 page rule. If i had not include the cover I would have gotten away with it. Well when i get a chance ill do a re-release this time add some pages to ease the readers eyes. ill add 1 or 2 pages to ease it
Again I'm glad you liked it!