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Thank you for the feedback! I will update this adventure as the expanded edition. Do keep an eye on it though

Thank you! the prey becomes the hunter. How quickly the tide turns on this dangerous example!

thanks! I will be doing this adventure to be expanded. So do keep an eye whenever I updated it. I will let this be a legacy edition for my creative efforts. Untill then BAAAAHH!

Good set of weapons! the chainsaw replacement is my favorite.

Thanks for the reply.
Don't worry I'm keeping the spell for what it is but ill change the usage and think twice about the recharge and understand the concept of risking the spell if its dire or not. Because this is like the saving grace spell that happens once in a blue moon.  I will make this work.

First of all, thank you for reading and enjoying the adventure!

I did play and print test this adventure by myself to make sure there is nothing wrong about it.

Disclaimer:  I’m not much good on some word choosing but I understand what you meant by that.

Secondly, the response on the critiques!

You may have a point on the back cover.  I may go over the background text again, tweak it out, along with easing the words mice and mouse lol.

The tree stump room yeah I think I may change this up… maybe instead of that ill might do something more than treasure appears out of nowhere. I may have using the digital pdf copy of mausritter to look it up quickly that’s on my end so pardon the confusion.

I wanted to include two creatures that in case of the players do understand the difference between a weak creature that they can kill easily or face a strong creature that they may retreat or come up a better way to trick the creature easily.

The labyrinth I may try to add +1 for every failed WIS roll,To speed up the exploration.  Again that’s on my end on the word choosing I didn’t realize that found was the word I should’ve used.

The sword graveyard I’ll double check this again on the pages both on the book and the pdf they are definitely a mistake on my end so again my bad.

For Hermefaun some modules labeled big creatures without warband scale for some reason.. so in the end I’ll label him as warband scale.

I do agree man. I think to myself that this spell is really op. So if we pictured this that the spell can be recharged every week like a full rest which is a week aka a watch that would mean this would render the other spells to be obsolete like yikes! I could do the following if I would  stick to the form spell 1.) it takes about 3-4 months to recharge because this spell is op. 2.) find the tallest point you can find then BAHHH at the sky 3.) find a herd of goats then plant it wait till 3-4 months.

I may do different goat themed spells since you asked about them being simple that would give me an idea.

Thank you for the criticism and feedback on this! I will be updating this adventure first.

I am doing an expansion to this adventure, I’m not leaving it out like this. It’s called Hermwood a hexcrawl setting

Features

Different backgrounds to play as like a fly mouse riding with a bug as your steed

3 factions* so far..(yes the Hermefaun can be your faction leader.) *may add 2 or 1 more….

(I may include other additional adventures but let’s not go too far yet..)

Baaaaaaaahhhhh!

Very great writing, great visuals i have seen!
This is so rad you don't want to quit this adventure while you're a HEAD!

I like the writing on this. It makes me want to learn more on more flavorful words the next adventure i would write up! The map is really good.  Good work on this one!

Cool adventure to explore, the map and color choices really nail it good!

cool concept in this one! I love the art on this skeleton!

Wacky is the absolute fitting title! I haven't heard of knave 2e but seeing this content and the art I love this work!

Good sketch on the map and nice starting items!

cool art and cover! Very good on this adventure.

great module fits well enough in MÖRK borg . Cool cover so much pulp fantasy vibes going on here and the module itself is handy.

cool design and fun experience to defend this place from these attacks. Cool adventure overall.

great world building and adventure.

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it, let me know how your session goes with your son! this would be the perfect time to celebrate the summerween times and soon Halloween! 

fun setup to decide what faction are you siding on.

thanks. I find fantasy horror fun and intense. gives me the Erie feeling vibe for the mice to be afraid while preparing for the dangers of what’s to come.

This adventure is both funny and entertaining to try out for a system agnostic courtroom scnario.  good piece

fun one to use this in a system neutral adventure! great artwork and nice use of symbols to stand out.

Wacky adventure that goes off the rails with trippy reality shifting effects good stuff!

For starters I'm happy you got a PERFECT title that fits right in! Daggers in the dark sounds fitting for a defense scenario the story is great and the mansion is great too. One thing I think it needs to be added, since this is a system agnostic scenario, I would prefer a few things 1. give us the stat blocks for the thieves 2. get some brief description about the theives (are they villagers who needed money to survive? were they rivals against another baron? or are they just like home alone bandits in a comedic silly way. ) 3 some examples of difficulty checks or any traps with dcs that you can throw in. 4. As for the theif tactics I do wished they have different plan routes and different tactics like they can split up to make the baron being paranoid or they would run away if they get spotted etc.
Overall, I love this heist that can be fun and a great way to start a campaign out of it. Do keep it up though!

Great pallete choices. Very great art! cool cover Plus fun adventure design. I would love to one day try shadow dark.

I love this concept, I love the colossus monster.  Gets this Greek mythology vibes! really useful to make a giant monster to be the BBEG or a boss.  I love the layout it feels like a teenager from the 1980s came to find the book then layout in a desperate need to set up for tonight's dnd game night.

that’s why system agnostic adventures works well in both ways based upon what ttrpgs work so well.  Plus using 2 or 3  colors goes well with it.

Your welcome. I love seeing making these wonderful pieces of work that feels like a pulp fantasy that you are in.

I love the set of 3 color pallete choices, cool map to check out and a perfect addition to mausritter or any osr games that would fit this style.

Getting the 1970s pulp fantasy survival adventure going on here. Great writing, great art and cover,  good  layout! Very bold effort

great artwork, good color choice, very good map so fits the theme perfectly.

great adventure in this floating coliseum island! Love the downtime section good job! 

gettin the tim burton alice in wonderland vibes with gremlins! nice layout and the mood mechanic is very handy when you try to cheer the Mylingars. Great art and cool cover.

Slasher style horror?  COUNT ME IN! Great layout work from liminal horror style fits the theme nicely.
the frontiersman is scary when it's in a silhouette. I love liminal horror!

Great cover art and so sci-fi fitting for death in space or mothership 1e More horror like this.

wild creativity that made me go wow! Great visual work and design.

interesting setting, I love this cover art. The writing is also good along with its color scheme.

great artwork and layout work. The writing is believable and you hop in the game! 

the writing is really good and doesn’t feel bloated just straight to the point, layout work is good. A interesting take to use a hexcrawl map as a mountain along tracking it. I like this one!

beautiful hexcrawl adventure to explore. The visual design of the map is so good and has the classical adventure vibes.

very cool art cover I love this! The concept is good and executed well enough! Layout I feel like it should be double column format but I’m ok with it. Like the one  comment  said.  Do check out all of the other submissions for inspiration on layout for next adventure. Keep it up!