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it is cool to see another inspiration of tmnt

Looks pretty cool. I hope there will be a solo mode for playing this. I'm liking this so far.

the cover looks great and feels like 70s retro paperback. Good job on the map!

I appreciate this effort. The art is good. The choice of layout is great and amazing to explore.

for 4 pages as a play system is very intriguing! Impressive! 

Thanks for the feedback!

I do agree with that . What I should have done is maybe don’t add the sketch numbers  for better clarity. As always in open for criticism.

I’m glad you liked the floral treasures list!

Thanks for the feedback and I hope you liked it.

As I mentioned before from previous replies, I’ll be editing and trimming the text so you can easily read it better than this. So expect an update on this adventure. Gonna study the rot black sludge module again for simple clarity for room descriptions while I’m sticking to the 4 page rule as well.

 thank you for the feedback!

As with the previous feedback comments that I received I understand what I’m going to do. Fix the too wordy text better just so it’s easier to read and make sure the font is also readable. So you can print it out easy. 
Im glad you like this!

Thanks! That’s why MÖRK borg fits the weird 1970s paperback flavor.

after looking at the feedback comments I’m going to edit the text better just so you can easily print and see it better. Since I was too wordy in describing it.

Thank you! Hope you enjoyed it! 
Ill be updating the font and text because its becoming too wordy. so expect an update! also this is my first experience to make an adventure.

looking back at the mork borg book i have that contained Rot Black Sludge. Yeah I should've just ease the text so its not hard to read and give a few lines of text.. Thanks for the feedback. (I'll update this text better by edit the text better and doing bullet points.)

Thanks for the feedback and I hope you like it!
1 I think I feel I should've not put the numbers sketch in. I'm surprised you caught that Indiana Jones reference!

I like the idea of the title too and i have to look up what is celadon means.
"Fortune and glory kid. fortune and glory."

Thanks for the feedback! 
1. That's what I want your Mork Borg PC to despise the person who is greedy  and pretends that they "raided a temple" where in reality they are spotlight hogging it.  you are doing all the horrible work. (hey you can give that guy a "surprise" as karma instead of the knife!) that's how mork borg works.

2. Thanks for the comment about my sketches. I love doing these drawings weather pen or pencil! I aim for that old school paperback novel style. 
3. I tried my hardest best not to break the 4 page rule. If i had not include the cover I would have gotten away with it.  Well when i get a chance ill do a re-release this time add some pages to ease the readers eyes. ill add 1 or 2 pages to ease it

Again I'm glad you liked it!

this adventure is very handy for any osr tabletop games like MÖRK borg if it takes place in Galgenbeck sewer system.

Liminal horror to investigate the disappearance of victims 

And my favorite game mausritter  that could work for  a mouse with a sewer guide background. Great stuff man!

I love reto style layout and design and this takes the cake.  Layout is great and understandable to follow. 

nice art and layout. Captures the spirit of a pulp fantasy adventure. Not to mention this would work for a Mausritter adventure. You got some pretty good encounters that would work!

took inspiration from the classic style of when people put sketches in their books to show what it looks like. I’m glad you like it! Took an inspiration of the cave of time cover choose your own adventure books to give it a you are the star of this paperback adventure. I’ll update the page with better legibility. Thank you for your enjoyment! (Edit I love the artstyle you have there it reminds me of the old 70s books or 70s cartoons. impressive on your end!)

 thanks for the feedback, while I’m still on following the rules is 4 pages the least I can do is to find a different font that can be readable even if its small. I love this jam!

Also yours look good too 

Nice adventure and work. I appreciate this. I might do a solo adventure on this.

Guys I may have to update this on the back of the adventure. So for now, ignore that extra piece of text in 1. (Edit: it’s updated)

this would be fitting for MÖRK borg taken place in Sarkash!  Or mausritter where it turns out this is a weed infested land

That's right man Bionicle need to be in this grimdark adventure!

thanks, i also find out that dominos can be a perfect idea to make dungeons out of them. i just stumble at a dollar store that sells these and  i came up an idea and also looked up if anyone did a domino dungeon crawl project and it clicks at me.

Had to look up the Bionicle masks and oh boy there's a lot you can make an expansion to this. way to many to count and even implement them!

Thank you! also had to replay that dark tower commercial and i could picture a group of scvms or one adventurer lay siege to the towering castle and slay the enemy within!

I studied the ninja borg rules and the current noun borg submission. At first, I was confused but I understand it. May have to look for spelling mistakes and update it. Along with adding some enemies too!!!!

The killing joke ,Batman villain origins, and some edgy media gives me an inspiration about it..  I want pcs extended their meanings in the dying lands while they carry the suffering.

7 out of passion!

Had to make a Zelda themed idea plus inspired by the Zelda races. I may update more content even after the jam.

I could imagine playing this on commodore c64! great work.

First off nice inspirational idea about the library  of babel. Secondly i like this concept. I would certainly explore a never ending library around it. My rating 5 Tim’s out of 5

Great for a nice classic D&D inspired hack for Mork Borg.

Impressive stuff! nice job of using like printout paper cutouts! epic stuff!

for the glory of BIONICLE!

that one is fun to make!

wasn't easy but it was worth a challenge! thanks!

I have no idea. Quite the fitting theme from that song, actually.

Great writing, I find Dribbler a worthy dependable merchant! Heck he should be my bro.
love giving your weapons a twist that's worth risking. 

Thank you I’m glad you like it. I love making this kind of work.