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Not quite dialogue, but I find the distinction between "leaning" and "generally" confusing. Based on the icon and interactions, I expect that "leaning" is stronger than "generally", but based on pure vocab connotations I (ESL experience) expected it to be the other way around. Is it on purpose? Or could "somewhat" be swapped in for "generally", or "very" for "leaning"?

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This is a hard thing to express in words and I'm not sure there's an ideal solution for it.

When your skill at identifying people's positions is not very high, then all you can get is "hostile", "positive?", "negative?" without any more detail. So "generally positive" could mean anything from a super-lukewarm 51% approval to a full on 95% approval. You don't have the skill to be more precise. You never get a "neutral" result when your skill is at this level, you always decide it's one way or the other.

Whereas "leaning positive" is a more precise description of someone who is definitely on the positive side but not quite all the way up to friendly status. If you have enough skill for this outcome, you'll get "neutral" for people who are clustered more around 50/50. 

Someone who is "generally positive" might have higher, lower, or the same approval as someone who is "leaning positive" because you just can't tell.

But it's awkward for dialog purposes to write it as "positive???" even if that's pretty much what you're getting. It needs to be able to fit into the standard report of sensing feelings.

Open to suggestions, if this makes sense.

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"Probably positive" and "probably negative," maybe, to reflect vagueness and uncertainty? 

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Maybe “Roughly positive”, for breadth and coarseness? This is hard. D:

Ah! Okay, got it, I completely missed that.

Maybe getting rid of "leaning" when Zorana's Empathy is high enough? That way it's clearer that "generally positive" is vaguer than "positive". And you're left with "friendly" and "hostile", which I think read more intense than positive and negative.