https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2505068300
(Not sure how interesting this footage is, I took my sweet time moving around. I played until I wasn’t sure if there was more to see or not. Would sure have liked to figure that sack of cocaine but I hadn’t seen any further clues to it existing atm.)
I don’t know what feedback to give, you are clearly creating some kind of art and it will resonate with and be enjoyed by a small audience (me included); and crabs are gonna crab as they always do.
I like that the writing seems both personal and detached, such that we would never be sure any detail was really from YOUR biography, yet clearly your emotion is in it.
Some small observations:
- As with every RPGMaker game, I am repeatedly unsure if damage numbers are intended or completely bugged. Especially the Dietz character seemed nigh useless in combat, even his stronger attack hit for 0, 0, 0 usually. I just put him on Guard as a damage sponge.
- In a similar vein, the healing item is phrased like it would heal the whole party, but it heals just a single person, and for a puny amount.
- There seem to be some slight mistakes in the language at times, I am ESL myself so I wouldn’t dare to list them, maybe half the times it’s myself who is wrong. I only noted down "nonetheless [the] wiser" - the phrase is "none the wiser" I am quite sure, but I also don’t know if or how to use it in that context 100% correctly.
- Very phunny how you put those atms in the game so Tomo doesn’t have to crank out the cheat engine again.
The humor is generally funny and I appreciate how you put the real bad misery behind talking to the same character again and again, I was really not in the mood to go all the way...