I finally have the time to read through your detailed feedback. Thank you for taking the time to write it all down, this is extremely helpful during this second writing/editing phase.
I can’t wait to see how you like v2! And I’m glad I get to help with your module too. I’m really happy that this is the level of companionship and collaborative effort we reached for this game jam. you rock!
Point by point, I agree with pretty much everything. The only thing I might decide against is the summary block. I don’t want any spoiling information on the front or back panels to avoid accidental spoilers for potential players, and I don’t have the space for it elsewhere… it’s an editing choice that I’ll have to live with! The rest is going straight to v2. Thanks again.